My Persuasive writing

(Dong Ha Lee)
Korea KMLA
August 8th 2013

Dear PA's and TA's

I am writing this letter because I believe you should treat girls and boys equally.
Many students like Yeon Seok, for example agree with me. I will explain many reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.

 The first reason is because we are some students and paid the same amount of money.
There are statistics to show this is true. According to my roommates everyone  thinks it is unfair. Last time me and Yeon Seok didn't wear slippers and got a yellow card but the girls got caught by the same teacher but the girls got a chance and they didn't get a yellow card.

 The second reason is because it is unfair for boys and girls get different advantage. The girls get more advantage by getting less yellow cards. There are facts to show this is true. It has been shown by my classmates that 80%of them agree.

 The final reason is because boys have much more percentage to get a yellow card.
It is known by the facts I showed you before that you are giving girls chances we boys don't get.
 As you cans see, treating girls and boys equally is important.

 Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view and stop giving girls more chances which boys don't get and treat us the same

Sincerely,

Dong Ha Lee.

My creative writing- Spy Kids

Hello today I will tell you about a story I have made in a few days, And plus, it is quite short.

The title of this story is 'Spy Kids' I chose this title because I like spy stuff and especially when they are only kids who go to school.
Okay so the genre of this book is action. The characters of this book are Bryce, Andrew, Brand, scientists, and Dr. Smith. The setting are Dr.Smith's secret lab, Spy's secret base, and Wellington Middle School.
First Bryce was a normal student. But he was curious of why Andrew (his friend) went somewhere outside during class and the funny thing is the teacher lets him get out and didn't tell him anything or punish him. So Bryce thought of spying on him. It was pretty fun. And finally he saw Andrew going inside the locker and thought it was curious and also he didn't come out. So he went inside the locker. Suddenly when he went inside the locker he felt like going down in an elevator but much faster. Then finally it stopped and when he opened the locker he saw scientists and he saw his friend Andrew. Then suddenly there was an alarm and they said they said that someone broke into the lab. In a few seconds the scientists surrounded me and they said "Who are you?" Then Bryce ran as fast as he could to a door which said do not enter. When he entered he entered he closed the door right away and locked it also he put heavy materials to the door. When he looked around the room he saw a robot. The robot told him to sit down on the bed. So he did as he was told. And suddenly it scanned him and did something to his braces it hurt him allot and a few hours later when he woke up He was surrounded with scientists plus his friend Andrew and a man who looked familiar to me. He found out that it was our teacher Mr. Brand. They were talking about erasing my memory. But Mr. Brand said "No, he will be one of our spy from now on. Then everything became quite. After all this situation me and Andrew went outside. Andrew said "Okay now you listen to me. I will teach you how to use your braces." And a few weeks later he got 100% control on them. Finally Mr. Brand told us that there is a case and we needed to go right now. So we went to where there was a Jet. I was quite scared. And we went off to Russia. Mr. Brand told us that Dr. Smith made a new experiment and he is going to use it and kill a lot of people and that we needed to stop him. When we arrived there were a lot of guards. A few minutes later we arrived in to Dr. Smiths lab. But he was trying to press the button then the bomb would explode. He said "If you move I will press this button". We stood still until the guards locked us up. A few seconds I loosened my hand and Andrew said "Go quick before he bombs Russia away. And I ran to Dr. Smiths lab.

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