(Dong Ha Lee)Korea KMLA
August 8th 2013
Dear PA's and TA's
I am writing this letter because I believe you should treat girls and boys equally.
Many students like Yeon Seok, for example agree with me. I will explain many reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
The first reason is because we are some students and paid the same amount of money.
There are statistics to show this is true. According to my roommates everyone thinks it is unfair. Last time me and Yeon Seok didn't wear slippers and got a yellow card but the girls got caught by the same teacher but the girls got a chance and they didn't get a yellow card.
The second reason is because it is unfair for boys and girls get different advantage. The girls get more advantage by getting less yellow cards. There are facts to show this is true. It has been shown by my classmates that 80%of them agree.
The final reason is because boys have much more percentage to get a yellow card.
It is known by the facts I showed you before that you are giving girls chances we boys don't get.
As you cans see, treating girls and boys equally is important.
Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view and stop giving girls more chances which boys don't get and treat us the same
Sincerely,
Dong Ha Lee.
There is no any word except I strongly agree with you.
ReplyDeleteHum... I think this post is quite good one. I also agree with the TA, and PA's different punishment between girls and boys. I knew that they punish different, but I didn't know they discriminate this much. I think you write your opinion very clean, also claim your opinion was good. But I want to say that you don't have good evidence(?). For example there is no URL, and no expert opinion. Yeon seok isn't expert. Isn't he? And you said 80% of classmate agree with your opinion, but many people, especially girl didn't know you even research about it. I think you only asked to boys. Next time, if you have more expert opinion it will be perfect post. Don't be angry with that I said some bad things to you. Your post was very good except that.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Can you change the color of post. It is really hard to read, and get hurt at my eyes.
I started to read this and stopped because my already bad headache simply becomes worse when I'm trying to read this.
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